Fear and anguish I feel within.
'She' silently shows me the silver lining far beyond,
Like She's asking me to keep walking...
For the absolute brightness in store ahead can be lived,
Only if I pass through the darkness around.
Lost in the hurt, strangled in the fall,
I am reliving the words, the moments not so right.
Unable to accept the happening, allowing the thoughts to linger,
Holding on to it and unknowingly crushing my soul.
'She' patiently observes my agony and reminds me of the strength a huge mango tree adorned with mangoes galore, has...
Subjected with hardships more often it is,
Than loved for it's greatness, to relish its goodness!
Real strength is when you stand tall and strong,
Staying as beautiful and selfless as you are, untouched by the dirt!
Reflecting all the goodness you get from all.
Let go of the dark energy as they know not the worth of this sheen,
Continue walking the path of your blessing for you're the chosen beam...
Like they say "The dog is barking at the sun"...
You know what you wanna be like here, 'She' exclaims.. :)
To all the chosen ones out there! Stay forever strong and keep doing good!!
- Ahi (Just 'Her' child)
Very nicely penned! Keep continuing with your good job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shalu!!😇🥰
DeleteShe silently shows me the silver lining ar beyond.. my fav line.
ReplyDeleteI love it too my girl!! Imagine I felt it while writing this. Such a blessing that feeling was you know..❤️😇
DeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteThank you sweets!!! 🤩😊
DeleteAhi... That's beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThanks yaaa!!!🤩 Wish you had dropped your name :(
DeleteVery well written .waiting to read more from this brilliant talent
ReplyDeleteOiiiiii shukriyaaa my dear!!!😊🤩😊 No brilliant talent and all yaa, kuch bhiii 🤷
DeleteWowwww I love the way u penned it.. I so love the line ' real strength is when u stand tall and strong. ' such a beauty! God has gifted u with some amazing talents, my girl. Keep it. Up! So proud of u!
ReplyDeleteWow!!! 🥰❤️🤗 Thank you gundoos!! These lines are indeed very special to me!
DeleteExcellent ahila!
ReplyDeleteThank you Prashu!!! 😇🤩
DeleteSimply awesome ... Feels as if my old Ahi back with new creativity.
ReplyDeleteDeeply admire your work.
Keep going.
Thank you Binny!!!:*
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